That's good, but may I give some constructive criticism? It's great, it's just a little confusing. Try using smaller words for people who don't really know or care much about politics.
Global corporatism: This is good, but maybe global society or government control would be better?
Spending reductions: Maybe higher taxes, or corporate bailouts, or corporate handouts, or welfare state, or class warfare might be better?
Kinetic military action: Maybe endless wars, or super procrastination, or Middle East intervention, or allies <--> enemies, or simple Libya?
Again, just suggestions. I think it would be a really cool thing to put on posters or flyers.
That's good, but may I give some constructive criticism? It's great, it's just a little confusing. Try using smaller words for people who don't really know or care much about politics.
Global corporatism: This is good, but maybe global society or government control would be better?
Spending reductions: Maybe higher taxes, or corporate bailouts, or corporate handouts, or welfare state, or class warfare might be better?
Kinetic military action: Maybe endless wars, or super procrastination, or Middle East intervention, or allies <--> enemies, or simple Libya?
Again, just suggestions. I think it would be a really cool thing to put on posters or flyers.